Hi Keely!
Thank you so much for sharing, this is incredible!
My favorite part is definitely the opening lyrics “so many papers I have burnt / trying to chronicle my hurt”. It’s a very strong image, and images stick with readers and listeners. Would love to hear how this comes out as a song! Do you have a melody and such for it?
Keep writing, you seem pretty young, I never really took to writing lyrics until I was about 15 or so… it helped me get out all the junk I otherwise had difficulties expressing so I def recommend it as a type of therapy of sorts lol
Idk if you're on facebook but I founded a group called AZPoet as a place for people to feel open to share their poetry. Its riddled with tasty angst and aspiring writers and is a pretty fun group of people to bounce ideas off of it your ever in need of sharing. But of course you're always welcome to send em my way too :)
Thanks again for sharing!
-Derek
Thank you so much for sharing, this is incredible!
My favorite part is definitely the opening lyrics “so many papers I have burnt / trying to chronicle my hurt”. It’s a very strong image, and images stick with readers and listeners. Would love to hear how this comes out as a song! Do you have a melody and such for it?
Keep writing, you seem pretty young, I never really took to writing lyrics until I was about 15 or so… it helped me get out all the junk I otherwise had difficulties expressing so I def recommend it as a type of therapy of sorts lol
Idk if you're on facebook but I founded a group called AZPoet as a place for people to feel open to share their poetry. Its riddled with tasty angst and aspiring writers and is a pretty fun group of people to bounce ideas off of it your ever in need of sharing. But of course you're always welcome to send em my way too :)
Thanks again for sharing!
-Derek